Hello! Welcome to the magical blog of Tazzi’s, Beyond the
Veil.
I’m Tazzi and I will be posting any news and updates on
Beyond the Veil here.
There might be sections from chapter that are written three
chapters from now or even ten. I want as much wisdom and thoughts that you have
to offer. Also I will take any feedback you have and opinions of which point of
view you like the most/least. I know Sirius is a favorite so I’ll promise he’ll
be around. After all, it’s his story.
Please enjoy and I hope that this will keep you better
updated on everything that is happening.
Upcoming Chapters:
Chapter 26:
Gryffindor versus Slytherin
I know that many have been awaiting this chapter for a long time. I would also like to ask if anyone is interested in proofreading chapters before they come out.
Hi, I like Your story, it is quite different than anything I have read about 'next generation' so far. I wanted to tell you that it has been a delight reading it and that I am sorry it is taking this long to publish next chapters. If You are still looking for someone to help You with the grammar and spelling I am up for it. I like Your story and would really love to see more of it. I hope You continue writting.
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Thank you so much. I'm glad that you like it and I really appreciate comments like this. They are so wonderful to read and give me a warm fuzzy feeling.
ReplyDeleteI am truly sorry for the horrid delay in chapters. It was a combo of school and kind of just wanting to revise the whole thing.
I would love help with new chapters and even older ones if you like. I'm not the best at spelling and grammar errors and honestly after I read it so many times I miss the big and little things. I was going back through and kind of offended myself with the amount I missed.
I will continue writing and I almost have the next chapter done. I just need to finish up the last bit, but I stopped and started seriously thinking about a complete revision, before I go any further. I kind of want to change the point of view to third-person limited. And when I start thinking things like this I start wanting second opinions, because this would be a big change and I don't know it everyone would like it as much or how long it would take. It was something that I was just thinking about, but do you have a preference or think that it would be better or worst or equal with a point of view change.
Also I would love the help with grammar and spelling if you are still interested.
Taz
Hi, are you still writing? I know you're probably busy with school and stuff, but it would be such a same if 'Beyond the Veil' was abandoned - it's truly a great story.
ReplyDeleteI would also like to offer my services as your beta (grammar, spelling, contradictions, etc.) if you still require them.
~ S